Welcome to our weekly poetry stars’ celebration. This week’s challenge was to write a kouta syllabic poem.
Lisa Fox asked me if the optional fifth line syllable count should be five or seven syllables? I searched everywhere and couldn’t find any other instructions. Something didn’t seem right with this form, so I did a thorough analysis. Here is what I found:
There is a Japanese song called the Ko-Uta, which means little songs of the geisha. The book, “Little Songs of the Geisha: Traditional Japanese KoUta,” is a fascinating look into the world of the Geisha through the 400-year-old art of Ko-Uta, the traditional song form sung to three-stringed shamisen music. I found the book on GoodReads HERE.
I could not find an actual link to a reputable source to confirm the kouta follows these specific rules even though Poetscollective.org gives us a human source.
The Kouta 小唄 (little or short song) is a popular Japanese verse form of the Muromachi Period, 14th thru 16th century. The lyrical song was resurrected as a geisha song in the late 1800s and is still popular today.
The form has several variations, though always short in only 4 lines, a 5th line is sometimes added.
- a poem in 4 lines. (an occasional 5th line may appear)
- a standalone poem, but its often is accompanied by other Koutas with the same theme.
- Syllabic, variable, odd numbered syllable lengths. The most common patterns are written in lines of alternating 7-5-7-5 syllables or 7-7-7-5 syllables.
- Secular, personal, themes of ordinary life.
- often include onomatopoeia (defined above).
My biggest issue is whoever created the kouta form tried to play it off as an ancient Japanese syllabic poetry form. The Ko-Uta is the centuries old song sung by geishas, not the kouta. In fact, it appears someone named the form for the geisha, instead of the actual songs of the geisha.
Sometimes, people create syllabic forms on their own, which could be the case with this form. I found the kouta to be like the katauta. I believe the kouta is based on the katauta.
“The katauta is a Japanese poetic form that is actually considered an incomplete or half-poem. It’s a 3-liner that follows either 5-7-5 or more commonly 5-7-7 syllables per line. Sounds like a haiku or senryu, right? But this poem is specifically addressed to a lover.” (Writers Digest)
It makes sense that someone got creative with the kouta, not to be confused with Ko-Uta, traditional songs of the geisha.
To keep the names straight, here is a traditional Ko-Uta song:
Now that we have all that out of the way, I enjoyed writing the kouta form. The theme of kouta reflects ordinary life and often uses colloquialisms and onomatopoeia. It was fun to see all the poetry! Great job everybody. 💜
Many thanks to everyone who joined in below:
|2.||ben Alexander||8.||Aishwarya Kannan||14.||Colleen Chesebro|
|4.||Willowdot21||10.||The Versesmith||16.||You’re next!|
|5.||Paula Light||11.||M J Mallon|
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