I rarely write freestyle poetry, but after my walk today, all I could think about was how parched my part of Michigan has become. In my neighborhood, the friendly sounds of grass mowing, has altogether ceased. The grass doesn’t grow without the rain. Our city water is costly, and with the economic restraints on our budgets already maxed out; we choose not to water the grass.
Colleen M. Chesebro is a Michigan Poet who loves crafting syllabic poetry, flash fiction, and creative fiction and nonfiction. Colleen sponsors a weekly syllabic poetry challenge, called #TankaTuesday, on wordcraftpoetry.com where participants learn how to write traditional and current forms of syllabic poetry. A published author, Colleen is also an editor of “Word Weaving, a Word Craft Journal of Syllabic Verse, also found on wordcraftpoetry.com. Colleen’s mission is to bring the craft of writing syllabic poetry to anyone who thinks they can’t be a poet.
Recently, she created the Double Ennead, a 99-syllable poetry form for the Carrot Ranch literary community at carrotranch.com. Colleen’s poetry has appeared in various anthologies and journals including “Hedgerow-a journal of small poems,” and “Poetry Treasures1 & 2” a collection of poetry from the poet/author guests of Robbie Cheadle on the “Treasuring Poetry” blog series on “Writing to be Read."
Colleen published “Word Craft: Prose & Poetry, The Art of Crafting Syllabic Poetry,” which illustrates how to write various syllabic poetry forms used in her Tanka Tuesday challenges; and a collection of poetry, flash fiction, and short stories called, “Fairies, Myths & Magic: A Summer Celebration,” dedicated to the Summer Solstice. She contributed a short story called “The Changeling,” in the “Ghostly Rites Anthology 2020,” published by Plaisted Publishing House.
Find Colleen at Word Craft: Prose & Poetry at wordcraftpoetry.com.
Loved your poem and thoughts dear Colleen… Living in England Rain is something normal here. Except this year we had a very dry Spring and now a very Hot Summer… So going without rain for long,long periods as you do there must be hard.. So many places parched, while others have had over excessive amounts of rain and flooding…
Its interesting that water on Earth will always remain the same as it evaporates and condenses back down into rain… Its just where it drops that makes a difference…
I am reminded of a speech I think President Johnson spoke in 1962 when he said
” “HE WHO CONTROLS THE WEATHER, WILL CONTROL THE WORLD”
A quote you can look up and find much information on.. 🙂
Much love my friend and hope it rains for you soon…. <3 I will beat my drum and ask for rain… <3 both sides of the Pond…. less work on my arms in carrying water to our allotment plot.. <3 🙂
Thanks so much, Sue. With the cost of water, and everything else so out of control, we’ve not watered the grass much depending on the rains to come. Fingers crossed they do. I can’t imagine lugging water to your garden. I know England has been super hot this year. Let’s hope we get the rains in the fall and everything can recover. ❤️
Like wise, grass, lawns will recover given time .. Food plants are in need however..
I have no doubts rains, floods and blizzards are on the cards… Just keeping our energy high for nothing is ever as it seems…. Even though it may seem to be getting worse…. There are those who ‘Think They’ hold the control strings at the moment….
But I am very much looking forward to them being cut soon.. 🙂 And many may be surprised in the not to distance future
Stay positive Colleen…. Much love <3
Thankfully over this way we are not in a drought. Though we did have about ten days straight with temps in the 90’s – There are some brown spots, but mostly green prevails. Perhaps especially in the back where I’ve got so many trees to shade the ground?
I don’t have any trees in the back except the Japanese weeping cherry we planted this year. The previous owner didn’t plant any trees. It’s sad, really.
Some neighborhood associations have odd rules. I have neighbors that didn’t plant any trees because they didn’t want to rake. But they end up with the other nieghbors leaves anyway (perhaps not as much?).
Thanks, Gwen. We’ve lived in the high desert of AZ before so I know how intense those monsoons can be. I hope you’re all well and your computer is working. 💜
Yes! I like this poem a lot because it rings so very true about the energy of a summer rain storm, and presented me with such clear sensations of what these rain showers feel like. Great stuff.
It’s basically just wring prose with a lot of imagery. It has a place but not my favorite. It’s a challenge to write syllabic forms and that fills my heart. You write what makes you happy. ❤️
I wish I could bundle up our storm clouds and share them with you. I also enjoy thunderstorms. They are soothing to me. I loved your poem, Colleen, and I do hope you get rain very soon. 🙂
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Colleen M. Chesebro—Prose Metrist
Crafting Syllabic Poetry is my Ikigari 💜
One day, I stumbled across the Japanese word Ikigari. After some research, I discovered iki means life. In Japanese, Gai means worth or value. When these words combine, they form the definition of ikigari, which is life’s worth. It’s often translated or interpreted as a reason for getting up in the morning. So, yes, writing syllabic poetry is my ikigari.
I also believe writing syllabic poetry strengthens our writing skills. When we create poetry, we gain command of language; cultivate a healthy vocabulary, master literary devices such as metaphor, simile, alliteration, hyperbole, and allegory. We learn to work in imagery. We connect with our ikigari.
When I’m not writing poetry or crafting short stories, you’ll find me digging in my garden, or playing with my two unicorn cats, Chloe & Sophie. I live in East Lansing, Michigan with my husband—my soul mate. Most days you can find me writing poetry on wordcraftpoetry.com. 💜
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EXcellent poem. I do hope it rains for you soon.
Thanks, Darlene. It’s so dry. Our grass is crispy!
A splendid poem to which I can relate.
In the Northeast we are experiencing severe drought conditions.
It’s been rough this summer around the world. I hope it rains soon. 🙏🏻❤️
Loved your poem and thoughts dear Colleen… Living in England Rain is something normal here. Except this year we had a very dry Spring and now a very Hot Summer… So going without rain for long,long periods as you do there must be hard.. So many places parched, while others have had over excessive amounts of rain and flooding…
Its interesting that water on Earth will always remain the same as it evaporates and condenses back down into rain… Its just where it drops that makes a difference…
I am reminded of a speech I think President Johnson spoke in 1962 when he said
” “HE WHO CONTROLS THE WEATHER, WILL CONTROL THE WORLD”
A quote you can look up and find much information on.. 🙂
Much love my friend and hope it rains for you soon…. <3 I will beat my drum and ask for rain… <3 both sides of the Pond…. less work on my arms in carrying water to our allotment plot.. <3 🙂
Thanks so much, Sue. With the cost of water, and everything else so out of control, we’ve not watered the grass much depending on the rains to come. Fingers crossed they do. I can’t imagine lugging water to your garden. I know England has been super hot this year. Let’s hope we get the rains in the fall and everything can recover. ❤️
Like wise, grass, lawns will recover given time .. Food plants are in need however..
I have no doubts rains, floods and blizzards are on the cards… Just keeping our energy high for nothing is ever as it seems…. Even though it may seem to be getting worse…. There are those who ‘Think They’ hold the control strings at the moment….
But I am very much looking forward to them being cut soon.. 🙂 And many may be surprised in the not to distance future
Stay positive Colleen…. Much love <3
Here’s to your poem bringing you some much-needed rain!
Yes! We need it so badly. Thanks, Liz. 💜
You’re welcome, Colleen.
I’m so sorry to hear about Michigan – a fantastic poem, and I hope it works. Toni x
Me too, Toni. It’s strange weather everywhere isn’t it?
Oh my. I wish you rain.
Rain and miracles.
Lovely poem, Colleen dearest.
Let it rain; Make it rain:
https://youtu.be/hD5hIqeKNVE
Thanks, Selma. You’re so sweet. 💜
So mote it be, both there and here. Flooded June 3rd-no rain since….
We’ve only had a stray shower that barely gets the sidewalk wet… so I totally understand. ❤️
Tell you what. If we get some, we will send it your way! Boogie on girl!!
Sounds good but I think I usually send it your way! 🤣 Wow, it’s dry. 🥵
I wish you rain and magic, Colleen! We’ve had rain off and on for the last three days and I am grateful for every drop.
Yay for rain! It is just so dry… I look forward to the rain.
Thankfully over this way we are not in a drought. Though we did have about ten days straight with temps in the 90’s – There are some brown spots, but mostly green prevails. Perhaps especially in the back where I’ve got so many trees to shade the ground?
Gentle rain for all in need. (((Hugs)))
I don’t have any trees in the back except the Japanese weeping cherry we planted this year. The previous owner didn’t plant any trees. It’s sad, really.
Some neighborhood associations have odd rules. I have neighbors that didn’t plant any trees because they didn’t want to rake. But they end up with the other nieghbors leaves anyway (perhaps not as much?).
No there are tons of trees around us. The previous owner was a single mom. She had no extra money, I’m sure.
🙂
Fingers crossed, hoping you get rain soon! I loved your poem, Colleen. Beautiful! ❤️
Thanks, Gwen. We’ve lived in the high desert of AZ before so I know how intense those monsoons can be. I hope you’re all well and your computer is working. 💜
Yes! I like this poem a lot because it rings so very true about the energy of a summer rain storm, and presented me with such clear sensations of what these rain showers feel like. Great stuff.
Thanks so much. I sure hope it rains soon. Today’s promise of rain produced two drops! That was it.
Ooops. Wetter here …
Doing a rain dance for you Sis. I love your freestyle. I am quite drawn to that style since I got hooked on Frank Prem’s poetry. <3
It’s basically just wring prose with a lot of imagery. It has a place but not my favorite. It’s a challenge to write syllabic forms and that fills my heart. You write what makes you happy. ❤️
<3
I wish I could bundle up our storm clouds and share them with you. I also enjoy thunderstorms. They are soothing to me. I loved your poem, Colleen, and I do hope you get rain very soon. 🙂
Thanks, Yvi. It’s such strange weather anymore.
Fabulous Colleen.
https://youtu.be/hrnhpNw7hUI
Wow! How did you reply with an image? I love it. Look the grace in her stance! <3
I believe if you put this into your search or YouTube you will find the video
https://youtu.be/hrnhpNw7hUI
It’s amazing, Willow! WOW!! <3
It’s beyond amazing 💜
I’ll say! Wow!! <3
Yes 😀😀