For months, winter’s clouds painted the Michigan skies a steely gray, robbing the world of color. “Talk what you please of future spring and sun-warm’d sweet tomorrow;” for today, I walk the path of this spring, holding tight to winter’s sorrow.
Today, the sun’s heat fills my heart with the warmth that winter robbed from me last year. My steps are light as I trod the path to the nearby slough, where red-winged blackbirds ride the stalks of last year’s fuzzy cattails.
All around, the signs of spring call to me. Snow drops and crocus poke through piles of dark, rich soil. Daffodils bob their yellow heads in the breeze, as if in agreement with my thoughts.
Finally, the time I’ve waited for lays naked, exposed to the rebirth of a new season, a new me. The wheel of time slowly moves forward.
Colleen M. Chesebro is a Michigan Poet who loves crafting syllabic poetry, flash fiction, and creative fiction and nonfiction. Colleen sponsors a weekly syllabic poetry challenge, called #TankaTuesday, on wordcraftpoetry.com where participants learn how to write traditional and current forms of syllabic poetry. A published author, Colleen is also an editor of “Word Weaving, a Word Craft Journal of Syllabic Verse, also found on wordcraftpoetry.com. Colleen’s mission is to bring the craft of writing syllabic poetry to anyone who thinks they can’t be a poet.
Recently, she created the Double Ennead, a 99-syllable poetry form for the Carrot Ranch literary community at carrotranch.com. Colleen’s poetry has appeared in various anthologies and journals including “Hedgerow-a journal of small poems,” and “Poetry Treasures1 & 2” a collection of poetry from the poet/author guests of Robbie Cheadle on the “Treasuring Poetry” blog series on “Writing to be Read."
Colleen published “Word Craft: Prose & Poetry, The Art of Crafting Syllabic Poetry,” which illustrates how to write various syllabic poetry forms used in her Tanka Tuesday challenges; and a collection of poetry, flash fiction, and short stories called, “Fairies, Myths & Magic: A Summer Celebration,” dedicated to the Summer Solstice. She contributed a short story called “The Changeling,” in the “Ghostly Rites Anthology 2020,” published by Plaisted Publishing House.
Find Colleen at Word Craft: Prose & Poetry at wordcraftpoetry.com.
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35 thoughts on “The Rebirth”
Rebirth is Nature’s miracle, and we all share in it. I love the delicious detail in this like “where red-winged black birds ride the stalks of last year’s fuzzy cat-tails”.
I grew up in Wisconsin, which is about the same as Michigan. This has been a really slow spring this year. Hardly any buds on the trees. We go back down into the 30s at night, this weekend. LOL!
I grew up in Milwaukee, WI. Michigan has some tax exceptions for 100% disabled vets that Wisconsin doesn’t offer. My hubby is a disabled vet. That’s one reason why we’re here. I do love both states and they are very similar. <3
That makes sense. There are a lot of similarities, but yes, you have to go where it is best for your family. We lived in Marquette in the UP for a couple years; we loved being so close to Lake Superior.
Rebirth is Nature’s miracle, and we all share in it. I love the delicious detail in this like “where red-winged black birds ride the stalks of last year’s fuzzy cat-tails”.
Thanks so much. Adding color in prose and poetry makes our imagery so vivid. <3
Ah, Michigan, our Michigan! <3
It was such a lovely day. One of the special ones. 🌟🥳
I enjoyed your prosery a great deal. Spring is nearly here for me as well.
I must say, I am really liking your new blog theme. It’s visually appealing and very easy on the eyes.
Thanks, Liz. This theme is attractive and you can change colors and fonts. ☀️
You’re welcome, Colleen.
Love this especially; “Daffodils bob their yellow heads in the breeze, as if in agreement with my thoughts.” 💝💝 Gorgeous write 😀
Thanks so much. It was such a great day!
Absolutely beautiful! I felt as if I were walking by your side, Colleen! 🙂
It was a lovely walk, Yvi. Nice and warm. 💖
and now I found the like button. I have no idea which browser WP took me to, to see it. lol
Really? 🤦🏼♀️
Very nicely done! I am glad to see springtime emerging from the cold dark winter!
Thank you! It’s been so cold.
You are welcome!
Oh what gorgeous prosery bringing the light to the doldrums of winter. <3
Thank you. It was a lovely day. Today promises to be lovely too. 💖
I love your eternal optimism <3
Awww Sis. That’s all we’ve got. LOL! <3
<3 xx
Such a lovely sentiment, Colleen 🙂
<3
David
Every spring, I look back on the previous year to see how much I’ve grown. There’s always so many new things to learn and experience. 💖
A beautiful lightness in your description of the coming of spring…
Thank you so much. It seems like spring has taken forever to arrive this year.
When spring finally comes it is always so very welcome… and there we walk enjoying the bloom…
Thank you so much. It’s true. Spring is always the most welcome season.
We share similar skies in Ontario. Happy to see the sun poke out of grey days. A beautiful write.
A most luscious description of Spring, a walk as it unfolds in Michigan. I spent 24 years in MN, I understand those feelings.
I grew up in Wisconsin, which is about the same as Michigan. This has been a really slow spring this year. Hardly any buds on the trees. We go back down into the 30s at night, this weekend. LOL!
Lovely! I didn’t realize you were in Michigan; I’m next door in Wisconsin. Our neighborhood is looking very similar as everything awakens around us.
I grew up in Milwaukee! 💖
I grew up in Milwaukee, WI. Michigan has some tax exceptions for 100% disabled vets that Wisconsin doesn’t offer. My hubby is a disabled vet. That’s one reason why we’re here. I do love both states and they are very similar. <3
That makes sense. There are a lot of similarities, but yes, you have to go where it is best for your family. We lived in Marquette in the UP for a couple years; we loved being so close to Lake Superior.
I have quite a few friends in the U.P. I bet that was gorgeous. We do live in two great states. <3