Welcome to our weekly poetry stars celebration. This week’s challenge was to work with the specific forms of Haiku and Senryu in English. These forms have rules. They are not just seventeen-syllable poems as most of you found out this week.
I understand many of you do not write your poetry for anything other than your personal enjoyment, and there is nothing wrong with that. However, when you label your poem as a haiku or senryu, (and not a seventeen-syllable poem) you should follow the rules… especially if you enter these poems in contests, or for publication in journals or anthologies. Also, anything published on your blog is a form of publication which is something to be mindful of.
We use the 5-7-5 form to practice with because it makes the composition easier with more syllables, and when you’re learning that’s a huge help. When you are writing haiku or senryu for contests or for submission to journals always use the short-long-short form, not the 5-7-5.
I’ve changed the Poetry Cheat-sheet to reflect the addition of a “seventeen-syllable poem” to use if your intent is to just have fun and not follow the rules of haiku or senryu. That takes the pressure off!
The biggest takeaway from this week should be learning what the juxtaposition was in haiku and senryu. Remember, combine lines one and two, first. Are you left with a coherent message? Next, take lines two and three. Do you get a different meaning from these lines? If so, you’ve created juxtaposition!
Here is Reena Saxeena’s senryu poem:
love rules hearts, then minds -let go ©2021 Reena Saxeena
Lines one and two: “love rules, hearts, then minds”
Lines two and three: “hearts, then minds—let go”
There are two distinct messages in this poem that merge and flow into the last line—let go! What a great message this is!
Many thanks to everyone who joined in below:
|1.||Erlyn Olivia||10.||Reena Saxena||19.||Kerfe Roig|
|2.||anita dawes||11.||Ritu Bhathal||20.||Colleen Chesebro|
|4.||Trent McDonald||13.||Pat||22.||s. s.|
|7.||Annette Rochelle Aben||16.||Selma||25.||Sally Cronin|
|8.||D. L. Finn||17.||Heather||26.||kittysverses|
|9.||Gwen Plano||18.||Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr||27.|
There some other great haiku and senryu, as well:
As many of you already know, my newest book, “Word Craft ~ Prose & Poetry – The Art of Crafting Syllabic Poetry,” is a bit closer to becoming a reality.
Last Monday, I sent the book off to my editor. I also want to thank Frank J. Tassone, my mentor, and American Haijin, for kindly editing the Japanese forms in this book. His help and kindness have been invaluable. I’ll keep you posted on the progress of the book and when to expect publication.
I have another surprise up my sleeve… stay tuned for more of that news next month!