Our theme prompt for this week came from Sue Vincent. She selected one of her own haiku for us to use as inspiration for our own syllabic poetry:
clouds cover the moon, beyond dawn's pale horizon sun rises unseen ©2020 Sue Vincent
I love using another piece of poetry as inspiration. Our perceptions are all different and there were many ways you could look at the poem. Congratulations everyone. You all did a fabulous job!
This week Padre’s poetry caught my attention. He chose the line from Sue’s haiku: “sun rises unseen” as his prompt. He created a double mirrored cinquain (two mirrored cinquains).
A mirror cinquain comprises two five-line stanzas consisting of a Crapsey cinquain (five-line, non-rhyming poem featuring a syllable structure of 2/4/6/8/2) followed by a reverse cinquain (syllabic pattern of two, eight, six, four, two).

Congratulations, Padre! You get to select the theme for next month’s #theme challenge. Please email me at tankatuesdaypoetry@gmail.com with your idea. Thank you.

“Night Dwellers,” Double Mirrored Cinquain
Night time
The darkest realm
The nocturnal dwellers
Scarcely aware of the coming
Sunlight
Morning
A place by night dwellers eschewed
They prepare for their sleep
In the dawn hour’s
brightness
Night time
The darkest realm
The nocturnal dwellers
Unaware of the coming sun
Spread wings
Unknown
Is the bright times of the daylight
For they in darkness rest
At the sunrise
They sleep
©2020 Padre
source: https://padresramblings.wordpress.com/2020/11/24/night-dwellers/

See you for the new challenge tomorrow!
Congratulations, Padre!
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Thanks for joining in, Sis ❤️
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You are most welcome!
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I’ve loved seeing how this prompt developed this week 🙂
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I felt the same way. It was a fun idea to use your haiku Sue. Loved it! ❤️
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It was written for the challenge, Colleen 🙂
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Oh, Sue! That makes it even more special. Thank you. ❤
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Congrats Padre, beautiful.
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Thanks, Denise. ❤️
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A wonderful and worthy winner!
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Thanks so much, ladies. ❤️
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Well done, Padre. I like the first one best.
Colleen, your avatar/memes make me laugh. One of these days, I’ll get back to joining your challenge. 😀
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Yay! I miss you and Jane and your creativity. With the holidays everyone gets busy. I’m packing and staying busy myself. ❤️
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Awww. ❤️ Yes, I have work projects and poetry projects going on. It’s hard to keep up with everything. 😀 Good luck with your packing!
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I know, Merril. No worries. ❤
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Did I forget to put my contribution on mr linky? I’ll see if it’s still open (k)
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I don’t close them out. I didn’t see you there. I’ll add you. ❤️
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Mr. Linky is not showing up for me at all. I think I had that problem before. Anyway, here’s my contribution. (K)
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Interesting! I have no idea why, Kerfe. 🤦🏼♀️
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Padre’s verse reminded me of some indigenous peoples like those who live at the bottom of the Grand Canyon who have nought been topside their whole lives… And really if all they need is there where they are??
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I get that, Jules. That is a great analogy of his poetry. Sometimes I think we make life too complicated. ❤
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Congratulations, Padre! Beautifully written.
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Thanks, Franci. Padre did a great job! ❤
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A wonderful poem, and I love the shape of the double form. A perfect fit. Congrats to Padre on the lovely response to the prompt.
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Thanks, Diana. These prompts are so fun. ❤️
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