Crafting Poetry One Syllable at a Time
It’s the fifth Tuesday of the month! This is our chance to work with a specific syllabic poetry form. So, take this opportunity to learn more about the particular form. You can use any subject, theme, or words to convey your message.
TANKA
Here’s a quick review of the tanka form:
TANKA IN ENGLISH: 5/7/5/7/7 or the s/l/s/l/l/ syllable structure. Your Tanka will comprise 5 lines written in the first-person point of view from the perspective of the poet.
When writing a Tanka, we consider the third line your “pivot,” but feel free to let it happen anywhere, or to exclude it. It is not mandatory. If you use a pivot, the meaning should apply to the first two lines, and the last two lines of your Tanka. Remember, we can read great tanka poems both forward and backward.
Autumn gusts signal an advance in the seasons change perfumes the air as if driving acceptance of the things I cannot change
Notice the first three lines below. We know Autumn gusts signal a change in the seasons.
Autumn gusts signal an advance in the seasons change perfumes the air
The PIVOT is: “change perfumes the air.”
Now, take the third line (my pivot) and add the last two lines to the poem:
change perfumes the air as if driving acceptance of the things I cannot change
Notice how the last three lines (including the pivot) have a secondary meaning to the first three lines? I also use a simile (as if) which is a figure of speech in which we explicitly compare two unlike things: I compared the smell of change and driving acceptance…, in this example.
*When you write your tanka, split it apart like this and see if both parts make sense. There should be two meanings to your poem when you’re all finished.
Good tanka poems take practice. Keep writing and read how the Japanese masters wrote tanka:
PLEASE support the other poets by visiting blogs and leaving comments. Peer reviews help poets perfect their writing craft. Remember… sharing is caring.
This site even has a link so you can install the extension on Google Chrome.
For Synonyms and Antonyms. When your word has too many syllables, find one that works.
A simple yet powerful syllable counter for poems and text which will count the total number of syllables and the number of syllables per line for poems like haikus, limericks, and more. This site does the hard work for you.
The screenshot below shows what Mr. Linky looks like inside. Add your name, and the URL of your post. Click the box about the privacy policy (It’s blue). As everyone adds their links to Mr. Linky, you can view the other submissions by clicking on the Mr. Linky link on the challenge post. All the links will show in the order of posting.
Follow the schedule listed below:
I will visit your blog, comment, and TWEET your POETRY.
If you add these hashtags to the post TITLE on your blog (depending on which poetry form you use) your poetry may be viewed more often on Twitter:
#Haiku, #Senryu, #Haiga, #Gogyohka, #Tanka, #TankaProse, #micropoetry, #poetry, #5lines, #Haibun, #Prose, #Renga, #SoloRenga, #CinquainPoetry, #Etheree, #Nonet, #Shadorma
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Colleen, I love your sparkly picture. ❤ ❤
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I have a bunch of those holiday gifs I’ve saved through the years. They’re fun. ❤️
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❤ Like you, sparkly Colleen. ❤
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Awww, thank you, Jane. You’re so lovely. ❤
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Hi Colleen, reading our friend Sue’s comments on hospitals has got me thinking of my own experiences. I am in the older bracket now and seeing how life sometimes turns out for older people has brought me to writing a Tanka on compassion for the elderly.
xxx💜
https://willowdot21.wordpress.com/2020/09/29/colleens-2020-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-197-specificform-tanka/
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I’m in the older bracket too, Willow. Compassion is an amazing thing. ❤️
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It’s is, isn’t it a shame that there is not more to go around 💜
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I guess they think we’re expendable… Well, I’m not done doing great things yet. LOL! 😀
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No girl neither am I 💜
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Perfect! ❤
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Good morning Colleen! Autumn is indeed a lovely season!
https://teandpaper.ca/2020/09/29/tanka-tuesday-books/
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I love it 🎃
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I had a little fun with htis one, though perhaps a little early for it 😉 https://trentsworldblog.wordpress.com/2020/09/29/a-month-early-or-a-year-late-tanka/
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LOL! 🎃
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I guess it is never too early 😉 🎃🎃
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LOL! Right? My favorite holiday! 😀
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Mine too! But then, it is my birthday, so…
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That’s right! I forgot that little tidbit! 😀
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Amazing … Very Nice Colleen… ❤
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Thank you. ❤️
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Very clear explanation of tankas, Colleen, thanks:)
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You’re welcome, Denise. I love this tanka. Much easier to write than the haiku. ❤
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Today, the universe gave me three different prompts that combined I wrote a tanka – three “stanzas” Is that a chain? https://rhscribbles.wordpress.com/2020/09/29/mytake-omm-fowc-octpowrimo-tankatuesday/
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This was so much fun. I agree with D.L., your explanation is great! Can’t wait for your book. Here’s my go at a Tanka based on my life right now. https://tchistorygal.net/2020/09/29/tanka-kittens-backward-and-forward/ Does your cat have those beautiful green eyes?
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Her eye are golden. She’s sleek, black, and looks like a black panther. 😂😍
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Our black cats had golden eyes, too. Our neighbor’s has eyes the color of you animated cat! I had never seen a cat with green eyes.
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LOL! That’s a Halloween cat, for sure! Freyja is so funny. She plays and jumps around chasing pen caps and corks. At least five times a day, she does “Halloween” kitty, with her back arched as she pounces on her prey. LOL! 😀
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She sounds young and full of energy! They are so cute when they are young and playful. My kitties (the big ones) are still a little playful, but Nutter Butter is serious about his pouncing. He catches something every day and the other cats revere him. 🙂
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Awwww. I love cats. They have such interesting personalities. Freyja, is like a teenager… she pushes the limits as far as she can! LOL! ❤
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They are fun. Bottle feeding is a pain when you have two at once and they both want the bottle, but they are so adorable. I love it when my husband takes one. I have about two-three more weeks of that according to the vet, but next week I can start weaning them. Yay!
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Awww, so sweet. ❤️
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Hi Colleen- Sharing a tanka this week!
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Thanks Colleen. Autumn, and a full moon too. (K)
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Right along with Mercury Retrograde.! 😳🤦🏼♀️
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Hi Colleen, here’s my Tanka attempt: https://www.gwenplano.com/blog-reflections/lost-in-the-moment
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Thanks, Gwen 🥰
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Hello, Colleen! I hope your doing well in these exciting times. Glad to see there’s still normalcy here on the Tanka Tuesday channel!
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LOL! Right? This is a safe place Dr. G. 🥰🎃
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Hi Colleen, here’s mine;
https://wordeologist.wordpress.com/2020/10/04/many-faced-tanka/
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Yay, Jude. ❤️
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Hi Colleen,
Thank you for the challenge. I’ve penned down a double tanka this week.
Hope you and everyone enjoys.
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Thanks, Kitty. ❤️
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You are welcome, Colleen. 🙂
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