
Franci Hoffman from Eugi’s Causerie II selected the theme for us this week. The night sky was her pick, and it generated an amazing amount of poetry. Bravo, everyone. You kept me enthralled all week. ❤

Here’s everyone who joined in this week via Mr. Linky:
1. | Padre | 11. | Jules | 21. | Dorinda Duclos |
2. | s. s. | 12. | Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr | 22. | Kat |
3. | Reena Saxena | 13. | huwanahoy | 23. | Kerfe Roig |
4. | anita dawes | 14. | Marsha Ingrao | 24. | Linda Lee Lyberg |
5. | willowdot21 | 15. | Cheryl | 25. | Dolores |
6. | Kim | 16. | Goutam Dutta | 26. | Merril D. Smith |
7. | Trent McDonald | 17. | Gwen Plano | 27. | Ruth Scribbles |
8. | Tina Stewart Brakebill | 18. | Donna Matthews | 28. | Pat R |
9. | theindieshe | 19. | Jude | 29. | M J Mallon |
10. | Myforever. blog | 20. | Elizabeth |
This week I selected Marsha Ingrao’s haiku sequence (including photographs) to pick next month’s theme.
I found her haiku garland to be really creative as it described different aspects of the night sky. In fact, she used all three haiku forms: 3/5/3, 2/3/2, and the traditional 5/7/5.

Did you know that many journals do not accept haiku written in the 5/7/5 format? I’ve not come across one yet, that does. If you do… Let me know.
Why is that? The reason is the way we count syllables in English compared to how the Japanese count onji (sounds). Modern haijin believes we should have fewer syllables to make our Haiku in English comparable to Japanese Haiku. So, fair warning… if you want your Japanese poetry published in a journal or other literary source, check out a previous edition of the journal first and count the syllables of the winning haiku. That is how you will know.

Congratulations, Marsha Ingrao, it’s your turn to pick the theme for next month’s challenge. Email me your choice at tankatuesdaypoetry@gmail.com before next month’s challenge.
Night blooms
Promised dreams
Maybe

Daylight slumps and sleeps
Snoring with coyote's call
Signals predators

Mr. Moon
grumpy, sinister
Plots evil

Hides his face
From tree owls lurking
On the prowl
City Life
Differs
Lights control

City lights
glamor of the dark
Reflected

Summer nights
Incendiaries
spark the dark
©2020 Marsha Ingrao
source: https://tchistorygal.net/2020/09/22/haiku-the-night-skies-of-elderwood-maui-and-melbourne/

See you tomorrow for the new challenge!
Well done, Marsha Ingrao for winning, well done Franci Hoffman for our prompt, well done everyone who entered! Thank you Colleen as ever 💜
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You’re a darling, Willow. Thank you for being you. ❤️
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It a pleasure to join bin Colleen
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Well, I love seeing you! ❤
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Thank you 💜
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Congrats Marsha. I enjoyed how it flowed with the differently paced Haikus.
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It’s a fun exercise to make those meaningful with fewer syllables. ❤️
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Congratulations, Marsha. Wonderful photos and verse.
Thank you Franci for the great theme.
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Thanks, Merril. I love these themes! 😍
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Excellent haiku serious with accompanying photos!
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Yes, on both counts. Brilliant work! 😍
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Congratulations, Marsha. Not only were your haiku beautiful, but they were also instructive. Thank you on both fronts!
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Thanks, Gwen. 😍
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Great theme and great verse! (K)
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It was pretty amazing! 😀
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Congrats to Marsha. Her poetry is always so creative. ❤ xx
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I loved her photos, as well. Really creative. ❤️
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❤
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Wow! I got a comment on my notifications from Deb that I was picked this week! I’m so excited and thrilled. This has been a fun learning journey for me. Thank you so much, Colleen! 🙂
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You’re welcome. You did a great job! Your haiku were excellent. ❤️
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That’s high praise, and I’m humbled. I’m looking forward to picking a theme. I’ll email you today.
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Thanks, Marsha. I know we have the rodeo next month as well. ❤
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True that!
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Well done!
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Thanks, Linda. ❤
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Congrats to Marsha. Some wonderful haiku! Now I have to check out the rest of the entries. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Diana. ❤
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