
Congratulations to everyone who joined in this week! You always surprise me with your creativity and clever poetry! I want to share a few of the forms you used and the poetry to go along with it.
Next year, I want to add some new syllabic forms, including a few with rhyming schemes. This is a challenge after all, and we must continue to challenge and expand our poetic knowledge.
Gouttam Dutta shared an interesting form called the Seox, by Anne Byrnes Smith. It is a hexastich, with a syllable count of 3/7/6/5/4/3.
Twilight Hour
Setting sun;
Breath exuding orange hues.
Holds fort at horizon.
Meanwhile, silent dusk,
Spreads a black shroud
On Earth’s land.
©2020 Gouttam Dutta
Merril D. Smith shared a Triquain, created by Shelly A. Cephas. This form is a poem with several creative variences and can be a rhyming or non-rhyming verse. The simpliest form is a poem made up of 7 lines with 3, 6, 9, 12, 9, 6, and 3 syllables in this order.” [Misspellings in original.]
A Laugh Wings, Triquain
A laugh wings–
flies through memories and
dreams. Sings like a mockingbird, repeats
again, imprinted in our minds, within our genes–
well, who’s to say? We remember a
glance, words said—heart-haunted—
we grasp, hold.
©2020 Merril D. Smith
And the last amazing form is created by Jane Dougherty called a Florescence poem. Jane says, “This is a sequence of three Florescence poems, three lines of six, six and nine syllables respectively, with a rhyme on the sixth, twelfth and eighteenth syllables.“
Florescence sequence: Day night sleep
Beneath the bird’s egg blue
of sky by rain washed new
and clothed in heaven’s hue, all seems clear,
though in the darkest night
the brashest city light
casts shadow black and white—monochrome.
Yet take my hand, we’ll run
till days and nights are done
swept up into the sun, there to sleep.
©2020 Jane Dougherty

Great job, Everyone! Thanks for the feature, Colleen!
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You’re welcome, Merril. I like learning about these forms. ❤️
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Gorgeous poetry. I love it that you share your favorites, Colleen. And I can see why you pick them. ❤
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I love the first of the month challenge, Diana. This is where the poets can try new forms and share them on their blogs. It keeps us all on our toes. LOL! 😀
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Some new (to me) forms too. That’s especially fun.
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Exactly! I have to keep these poets interested in the challenge. LOL! ❤
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Some amazing poetry Colleen.. congratulations everyone…x♥
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Absolutely brilliant! I love these new forms. Jane Dougherty created her own! So fun! 😍
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Congrats to the Poetry stars! Those poems are fascinating, Colleen. I’ve never before heard of these three styles. Thanks for sharing!
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Me either, Lisa. I love when you guys find these, try them out, and share. We can all learn together. ❤️
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Congratulations all those mentioned or not and thanks to Colleen 🕷️💜
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Thank you, Willow. Every one of you are my stars!! 💯⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Lol thanks
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Beautiful writing! Congrats to all! ❤️
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Thanks, Franci. 😍
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You’re welcome! 😊
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Thank you for the feature 😊🙇♀️
Thank you for sharing the new forms as well.
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You’re so welcome! ❤️
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