It’s the fifth Tuesday of the month! This is our chance to work with a specific syllabic poetry form. Take this opportunity to learn more about the particular form.
This week’s form is:
Haibun
Here’s a quick review of the Haibun form which consists of prose and at least one Haiku.
Consider this a sneak peak of my new book, Word Craft ~ Prose & Poetry which is in the final stages.
By the way, I need Haibun poetry to use as examples in the book. Same conditions as before. I use your poetry, you retain all rights to your work, and I quote you in the Bibliography. Thank you in advance!
Begin the haibun with a title. The title should hint at something barely noticeable in the beginning which comes together by the ending.
Your haibun prose can be written in present or past tense including, first person (I), third person (he/she), or first-person plural (we).
Subject matter: autobiographical prose, travel journal, a slice of life, memory, dream, character sketch, place, event, or object. Focus on one or two elements.
Keep your prose simple, all excessive words should be pared down or deleted. Nothing should be overstated.
The length can be brief with one or two sentences with a haiku, or longer prose with a haiku sandwiched between, to longer memoir works including many haiku.
There are different Haibun styles: Idyll: (One prose paragraph and one haiku) haiku/prose, or prose/haiku; Verse Envelope: haiku/prose/haiku; Prose Envelope: prose/haiku/prose, including alternating prose and verse elements of your choice.
The prose tells the story and gives the information which helps to define the theme. It creates a mood through tone, paving the way for the haiku.
The haiku should act as a comparison—different yet somehow connected to the prose, as it moves the story forward by taking the narrative in another direction.
The haiku should not attempt to repeat, quote, or explain the prose. Instead, the haiku resolves the conflict in an unexpected way. Sometimes, the haiku questions the resolution of the prose. While the prose is the narrative, the haiku is the revelation or the reaction.
As an added bit to the challenge… please use Frank J. Tassone’s photo as the inspiration for your Haibun. Frank says this spot is called Getrude’s Nose, a Rocky promenade located in Minnewaska Preserve State Park, in the Shawangunk Mountains outside New Paltz, New York (about a 2 hour drive out of NYC). Please include the copyright to the photo in your post.
For Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge, you can write your poem in the forms defined on the Poetry Challenge Cheatsheet:
Poetry Form Cheatsheet
This tutorial will help poets learn the different forms to use for Colleen’s Weekly Syllabic Poetry Challenge. HAIKU IN ENGLISH: 5/7/5 syllable structure. A Haiku is written about season changes, nature, and change in general. SENRYU IN ENGLISH: 5/7/5 syllable structure. A Senryu is written about love, a personal event, and should have irony present. …
Find out how many syllables each word has. I use this site to compose my poems. Click on the “Workshop” tab, then cut and paste your poetry into the box. Click the Count Syllables button on the button. This site does the hard work for you.
THE *NEW* RULES
Write a poem using a form of your choice: Haiku, Senryu, Haiga, Tanka, Gogyohka, Haibun, Tanka Prose, Cinquain, and its variations, Ehteree, Nonet, and Shadorma.
Post it on your blog.
Include a link back to the challenge in your post. (copy the https:// address of this post into your post).
Copy your link into the Mr. Linky below (underlined with a hyperlink).
Please click the small checkbox on Mr. Linky about data protection.
Read and comment on some of your fellow poets’ work.
Like and leave a comment below if you choose to do so.
The screenshot below shows what Mr. Linky looks like inside. Add your name, and the URL of your post. Click the box about the privacy policy (It’s blue). As everyone adds their links to Mr. Linky, you can view the other submissions by clicking on the Mr. Linky link on the challenge post. All the links will show in the order of posting.
Follow the schedule listed below:
I will visit your blog, comment, and TWEET your POETRY.
If you add these hashtags to the post TITLE on your blog (depending on which poetry form you use) your poetry may be viewed more often on Twitter:
Great Challenge Colleen , I wrote about part of my recent experience in hospital. I join in at the linky 💜. Thank you for the challenge and Frank for the photo.💜💜
I am slowly on the mend but not keen on the cholecystectomy drain and bag. I am getting used to it though, two weeks down and 4 to 6 to go until it’s removed and then hopefully the gall bladder too. It’s nice to feel like joining in again. I have missed everyone 💜💜💜💜
Hi Colleen,
Thanks for this challenge. I didn’t know there were different forms of Haibuns. I’ve tried my hand at Prose Envelope Haibun style, hope you and everyone enjoys.
I do too, Kerfe. I had issues with my email for the photo prompt. It should have featured Frank’s photo. However, this has inspired some awesome Haibun! ❤
Thanks for the challenge, Colleen. I struggled to write linking a picture of a place I’d never been with a type of poetry I’d never tried. So this was a great exercise. Well worth the struggle. 🙂 https://tchistorygal.net/2020/07/05/worth-the-struggle-haiban/
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Hi Colleen- I didn’t use the photo as I had an experience this morning I wanted to write about. Hope that’s okay…
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Of course! Never stifle creativity. I say, let it flow! ❤
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Great Challenge Colleen , I wrote about part of my recent experience in hospital. I join in at the linky 💜. Thank you for the challenge and Frank for the photo.💜💜
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Glad you’re home and writing again, Willow. Are you on the mend and just waiting to have the gall bladder removed? Thinking of you, Sis. ❤
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I am slowly on the mend but not keen on the cholecystectomy drain and bag. I am getting used to it though, two weeks down and 4 to 6 to go until it’s removed and then hopefully the gall bladder too. It’s nice to feel like joining in again. I have missed everyone 💜💜💜💜
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Those bags and drains… yikes! So uncomfortable. Here’s to you feeling better! ❤
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Thank you Colleen 😊💕
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Thanks Colleen.. something to think about…♥
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Thanks, Colleen! I’ll share a haibun, soon! 🙂
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As promised!
https://frankjtassone.com/2020/06/30/minnewaska-march-an-encore-haibun/
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Yay! I’ll be emailing you a manuscript soon!
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Thanks, Frank! 😍
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OK maybe the un-named sister could be Gertrude?
here’s: nous nous remémorons
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Interesting Colleen. I didn’t know there were different types of haibuns. Thanks!!
Pat
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Lots to learn about the different forms. 😍
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Hi Colleen,
Thanks for this challenge. I didn’t know there were different forms of Haibuns. I’ve tried my hand at Prose Envelope Haibun style, hope you and everyone enjoys.
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Thank you, Kitty! ❤
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You are welcome, Colleen. 🙂
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Hi Colleen
https://wordeologist.wordpress.com/2020/07/02/what-lies-within-haibun/
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Thanks Colleen (and Frank)–I like this double challenge. (K)
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I do too, Kerfe. I had issues with my email for the photo prompt. It should have featured Frank’s photo. However, this has inspired some awesome Haibun! ❤
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I’ll finally get one up! Scheduled the post for Saturday Morning.
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Yay! I need to write my own. 🤦🏼♀️
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Hi Colleen! I didn’t wait until Sunday this time!😂 I tried to stick to a traditional haibun, so Frank’s photo was sort of a metaphor.
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Excellent! LOL! ❤️
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😀
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The haibun strikes me as a pretty tricky form, although I am eager to try it. The ones I’ve read on your site have been very effective.
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It’s actually a fun form to write. Give it a shot and see how you do. ❤️
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I plan to, when the right subjext comes along (i.e., something I need to express and other forms just won’t do).
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Thanks Colleen and Frank for the motivation this week.. it led me down a rather dark path lol…https://smorgasbordinvitation.wordpress.com/2020/07/04/smorgasbord-poetry-colleen-chesebros-weekly-tanka-challenge-haibun-the-long-drop-by-sally-cronin/
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Ohhh… I can’t wait to read!
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Thanks Colleen..x♥
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I have tried simple haiku
https://scraps-from-life.blogspot.com/2020/07/deep-within-our-heavens.html?m=1
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Thanks for the challenge, Colleen. I struggled to write linking a picture of a place I’d never been with a type of poetry I’d never tried. So this was a great exercise. Well worth the struggle. 🙂 https://tchistorygal.net/2020/07/05/worth-the-struggle-haiban/
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Thanks, Marsha. I’m excited to read. ❤️
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