Reblog: Evening: A Mirror Cinquain | Padre’s Ramblings
Padre was the first to respond this week to Ritu’s fabulous photo. His Mirror Cinquain has been on my mind all week. Where I saw shadows and mystery, Padre saw a normal evening in the suburbs.
Padre, you can pick the photo image for next month’s challenge. Please email me at tankatuesdaypoetry@gmail.com with your photo. Please add any copyright information to go along with the photo. Thanks.
Image Credit: © Ritu Bhathal
Evening
Evening
Houselights appear
Baths done, pajamas on
Children to be soon tucked in bed
Quiet
Moment
Drink before the television
School lunches still to pack
Doors checked – secured
Goodnight
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A mirror cinquain is a syllabic poem form which consists of a 2/4/6/8/2 cinquain poem followed by a 2/8/6/4/2 reverse cinquain.
See you for tomorrow’s new challenge!
Beautiful choice 💜
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Sweet, simple, and unpretentious… 😍❤️
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Yes indeed as Colleen says this poem is “so good” 💜
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The beauty of the simple and everyday. Great choice, Colleen and congratulations to Padre
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Thanks, Olga. Beauty is right in front of us! ❤️
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Like a bedtime story!
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Yes! Very nice. ❤️
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Yes, I hadn’t thought of it that way!
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The few words describe an ordinary scene–it’s very ordinariness a sort of simple beauty in itself.
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That’s what I thought too. Sometimes I overthink these images. The mundane is beautiful in it’s simplicity. I feel very zen today. ❤️
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🙂
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Zen is a very good plan to be.
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*place
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Well said!
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Beautifully written poem to describe what is repeated daily across the world.
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The simplicity of the poem is what really grabbed me. Thanks so much, Michelle. ❤
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