Beyond | by Annette Rochelle Aben

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Annette Rochelle Aben has written her first Gogyohka! Her poem addition to the weekly challenge rates her a place as one of our poetry stars! Please stop by and tell her hello!

Image by Bertsz from Pixabay

View from the window

Frosted trees and bushes

Blue peeks through white clouds

Imagination removes the glass

The soul flies with the birds

©2020 Annette Rochelle Aben

Source: Beyond

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  9. 1) Great poem! Congrates Annette!

    2) I’m glad to see an example of the Gogyoka – I tried one myself, but I wasn’t sure about it. Now i can see that the lines are still quite short, and I like how distinct Annette made hers.

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