Today, Robbie Cheadle, stopped by to talk about a topic that is dear to my heart: poetry. I’ll be reviewing this book soon. ❤
Robbie and her friend, Kim Blades, collaborated on a poetry book called “Open a New Door.” This is a new release and you will find links to the book below.
I always like reading poetry. I enjoyed the descriptions, rhythm and word combinations. When I was a very small girl, I enjoyed nursery rhymes and rhyming songs and as I got older, I read books like The Hobbit and Emily of New Moon and really enjoyed the poems included in these books.
As an adult, there have been a few poems that have completely captured my imagination.
The first poem is “Dante’s Inferno,” which is the first part of Dante Alighieri’s 14th-century epic poem, Divine Comedy. The Inferno tells the journey of Dante through Hell, guided by the ancient Roman poet, Virgil.
In the poem, Hell is depicted as nine concentric circles, representing a gradual increase in human wickedness and the related fitting punishments, and culminating with Satan trapped in the centre of the earth. Lucifer is trapped waist-deep in a frozen lake from which he cannot escape. This is the depiction of Lucifer from the poem:
“… he had three faces: one in front blood red;
and then another two that, just above
the midpoint of each shoulder joined the first;
and at the crown, all three were reattached;
the right looked somewhat yellow, somewhat white;
the left in its appearance was like those
who come from where the Nile, descending, flows…”
Another fascinating poem that I came across “is The Temple of Nature,” by Erasmus Darwin. Erasmus Darwin, the grandfather of Charles Darwin, was a member of the Lunar Society of Birmingham and one of the key thinkers in the scientific, economic, political, cultural and legal manifestation of theAge of Enlightenment that developed in Birmingham and the wider English midlands. He was also a natural philosopher, physiologist, slave trade abolitionist, inventor, and poet.
“The Temple of Nature” was Darwin’s final long poem and waspublished after his death in 1803. It is about his concept of evolution and isconsidered to be his best work. The poem depicts the progression of life frommicro-organisms to modern man.
“Still Nature’s births enclosed in egg or seed
From the tall forest to the lowly weed,
Herbeaux and beauties, butterflies and worms,
Rise from aquatic to aerial forms.
Thus in the womb, the nascent infant laves
Its natant form in the circumfluent waves;
With perforated heart unbreathing swims,
Awakes and stretches all its recent limbs;
With girls, placental seeks the arterial flood,
And drinks pure ether from its Mother’s blood.
Erewhile the landed Stranger bursts his way,
From the warm wave emerging into day;
Feels the chill blast, and piercing light, and tries
His tender lungs, and rolls his dazzled eyes;
Gives to the passing gale his curling hair,
And steps a dry inhabitant of air.”
I started writing rhyming poetry with Michael to help him learn to read and write. At the same time, I wrote poems for adults about children and parenting. Over the past few years my poetry has evolved into an outlet for my personal anxieties, frustrations and general thoughts on life.
One poem I wrote is about my own chronic back pain. I have suffered with three degenerating discs in my upper back since I was twenty years old and it has become worse over the years. I now take a mild anti-inflammatory pill every night and see a physiotherapist once a week to keep my condition under control. Most of the time I manage but stress causes it to flair up and I have a few bad days every couple of weeks.
Pain, a persistent and stealthy foe,
Shoots well-aimed arrows from his bow,
They strike deeply into mind and soul,
‘Though our physical body exhibits the toll,
As the poison seeps into muscle and bone,
It’s a fight that you endure alone.
Its relentlessness causes the mind to tire,
Happiness and joy sink into a mire,
It must end, you must forward stare,
While your body this test does bear,
At the edges of your mind, there is hope,
Which provide the tools for you to cope.
© 2018 Robbie Cheadle
“Open a New Door,” is a poetic peep into the lives of the poets, Kim Blades, and Robbie Cheadle, both of whom live in South Africa.
The book is divided into four categories: God bless Africa, God bless my family and friends, God bless me and God bless corporate and work. Each part is sub-divided into the good, the bad and the ugly of the two poets’ experiences, presented in rhyming verse, freestyle, haiku, and tanka, in each of these categories and include colourful depictions of their thoughts and emotions.
The purpose of this book of poetry is encapsulated in the following poems:
What drives me to write?
To share my innermost thoughts
The answer is clear
It’s my personal attempt
To make some sense of this world.
Like the unfurling petals
Of the Desert Rose
© 2018 Robbie Cheadle
Thanks for stopping by to learn more about Robbie and her love of writing poetry!
Robbie Cheadle is part of the dream team of poets who participates in my Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge. Writing poetry is the gateway prose to writing better books! ❤
P. S. I used the new WordPress Hemingway editor to create this post. It took me longer than normal. I also found that cutting and pasting from a word document distorted many of the words and I had to spend time fixing the spacing between the words. It looks like the spacing is correct on the draft, but when you preview it, the words are not separated.
Some of the titles, I couldn’t center. It doesn’t like cut & paste used within the editor either. It does allow you to change the background color of certain blocks (like this one). It’s not terribly hard to work with, but my first impressions tell me that it is glitchy! It will take some getting used to… but, I didn’t die. 😀 ❤
“A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape of the universe, helps to extend everyone’s knowledge of himself and the world around him.”
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Colleen M. Chesebro is an American Poet who loves crafting paranormal fantasy and magical realism, cross-genre flash fiction, syllabic poetry, and creative nonfiction. Colleen sponsors a weekly syllabic poetry challenge, called Tanka Tuesday, on wordcraftpoetry.com where participants learn how to write traditional and current forms of haiku, senryu, haiga, tanka, gogyohka, tanka prose, renga, solo-renga, haibun, cinquain, Etheree, nonet, and shadorma poetry. Colleen's syllabic poetry has appeared in the Auroras & Blossoms Poetry Journal, and in “Hedgerow, a journal of small poems.” She’s won numerous awards from participating in the Carrot Ranch Rodeo, a yearly flash fiction contest sponsored by carrotranch.com. In 2020, she won first place in the Carrot Ranch Folk Tale or Fable category, with her story called “Why Wolf Howls at the Moon.” Colleen is a Sister of the Fey, where she pursues a pagan path through her writing. When she is not writing, she is reading. She also loves gardening and crocheting old-fashioned doilies into works of art.