Crafting Poetry One Syllable at a Time
Reena gives us an excellent example of a “Garland Cinquain.” See how her words tell the story of the image with each of her cinquain poems? Well done. I love it! ❤
freshness
being challenged
by collective wisdom
border line of existence
battles
life
unlined by
threads of experience
weaves rawness in embroidered
perseverance
mature
mind regrets
its gutsy thoughtlessness
belie self-imposed suffering
stillness
time
watches amused
on the sideline
recurring stories of conflict
sangfroid
contact
poking embers
unfolding fresh meaning
generating respect, all battles
ending
freshness
unlined by
its gutsy thoughtlessness
recurring stories of conflict
ending
Really beautiful 💜
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Each cinquain plays off the previous one – thus, a garland of thoughts. I’m impressed with poem. 😀
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Yes it is deep and Beautiful and very clever 💜💜
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It is thoughtful and beautiful. I enjoy reading it!
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Thanks for including me, Traci. ❤️
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