Happy POETRY Tuesday everyone! Are you ready to get groovy with your poetry? Then, you’re in the right place! Pull up a chair, and let’s write some poetry.
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For Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge you can write your poem in one of the three forms defined below:
HAIKU in English
TANKA
HAIBUN
You can do one poem or try to do one of each. It’s up to you – YOUR CHOICE. The instructions follow below:
HOW TO CREATE THE HAIKU in ENGLISH POETRY FORM
Are you new to writing the Haiku in English poetry form? Please read my page, How to Write a Haiku in English.
HOW TO CREATE THE TANKA POETRY FORM
Tanka poems are based on syllable structure much the same way a Haiku is written in the 5/7/5 format.
The Tanka form is easy to create: 5/7/5/7/7 and is a Haiku with two extra lines, of 7 syllables each consisting of five separate lines.
What makes a Tanka different from a Haiku is that the first three lines (5/7/5) are the upper phase. This upper stage is where you create an image in your reader’s mind.
The last two lines (7/7) of a Tanka poem are called the lower phase. Now here is where it gets interesting. The lower stage, the final two lines, should express the poet’s ideas about the image that was created in the three lines above.
Visit Jean Emrich at tankaonline.com Quick Start Guide
CLICK THE LINK TO SEE THE EXAMPLES and to learn how to write a Tanka poem
HOW TO CREATE THE HAIBUN POETRY FORM
NatureWriting.com shares how to write a Haibun poem. Please follow the rules carefully.
Writing Haibun
“The rules for constructing a haibun are simple.
- Every haibun must begin with a title.
- Haibun prose is composed of terse, descriptive paragraphs, written in the first person singular.
- The text unfolds in the present moment, as though the experience is occurring now rather than yesterday or some time ago. In keeping with the simplicity of the accompanying haiku or tanka poem, all excessive words should be pared down or deleted. Nothing must ever be overstated.
- The poetry never attempts to repeat, quote or explain the prose.
- Instead, the poetry reflects some aspect of the prose by introducing a different step in the narrative through a microburst of detail.
- Thus, the poetry is a sort of juxtaposition – seemingly different yet somehow connected.
It is the discovery of this link between the prose and the poetry that offers one of the great delights of the haibun form. The subtle twist provided by an elegantly envisaged link, adds much pleasure to our reading and listening.
Some Common Forms of Modern Haibun
- The basic unit of composition– one paragraph and one poem
Idyll
We guide our canoe along the shores of beautiful Lake Esquagama. It is nine o’clock at night on this evening of the summer solstice. As the sun begins to dim the lake becomes still as glass. Along the shore, forests of birch are reflected in its mirrored surface, their ghostly white trunks disappearing into a green canopy. The only sound is a splash when our bow slices the water. We stop to rest the paddles across our knees, enjoying the peace. Small droplets from our wet blades create ever-widening circular pools. Moving on, closer to the fading shore, we savour these moments.
quiet
as a feather
on the breeze
the distant call
of a loon
- The prose envelope – prose, then poem, then prose
Echoes of Autumn
I walk quietly in the late afternoon chill, birdsong silent, foliage deepened into shade, a rim of orange over darkening hills.
through soft mist
the repeated call
of one crow
Reaching the gate then crossing the threshold I breathe the scent of slow-cooking, the last embers of a fire, red wine poured into gleaming crystal, the table – set for two …
- Poem then prose
(Rather than begin with a single tanka, I wrote a tanka set or sequence, followed by the prose. In contemporary haibun writing, the poems are occasionally presented in couplets or in longer groups).
The Road to Longreach
the coastal fringe
of green and blue
disappears
behind the gateway
to the outback
wheat, sorghum
and cotton stubble
glistens
in the autumn sun
as hawks patrol above
sunflowers
faces to the sky
the last blaze of colour
in the dryland’s
barren outlook
brown soil
of the rural strip
surrenders to
brick red, burnt ochre
of the open range
beyond
and further out –
in orange dust
a single cornstalk
displays its tassel
Days pass as we move through the desolate landscape, carved into two parts by the road we travel on, a continual ribbon drawing us straight ahead into its vanishing point, where only spinifex grass and saltbush lies between us and our destination.
- The verse envelope — poem, prose, then poem
Winter Magic
silver light
thick hoar-frost
covers the window
Ice shapes resembling small fir trees stretch across the glass, while delicate snow flowers sparkle around them. Lost in its beauty, I move through this crystal garden as my warm fingers trace up and down, leaving a smudged pathway.
Mother’s voice interrupts, “Susan, come away from that cold window and get dressed or the school bus will leave without you!”
burning hoop pine
scent of a warm kitchen
oatmeal with brown sugar
- Alternating prose and verse elements
The Sentinel
I climb round and round close to the outside wall, to avoid the railing where the stair treads narrow about their central post. A semi-circular platform rests high above. Its glass windows provide a sweeping view. Counting the last few steps, I finally reach the top of the Moreton Bay Lighthouse, where I gaze in awe at the ocean below.
the rising sun
an endless pathway
of molten gold
Outside the lighthouse, lamp is rotating. I disengage it as there is no need for its warning light. Now the bold red and white stripes of the lighthouse itself will become the beacon. I study the turbulence of the deep waters churning the rocky shore below. The subtle changes in the wind, waves, and tides are entered in my log book – these brief markers of the ever-transforming seascape that surrounds me.
ebb tide
a foot print shelters
one tiny crab”
Here are some great sites that will help you write your poetry and count syllables.
For Synonyms and Antonyms. When your word has too many syllables, find one that works.
Find out how many syllables each word has. I use this site for all my Haiku and Tanka poems. Click on the “Poetry Workshop” tab to create your Haiku or Tanka.
THE RULES
I will publish the Tuesday prompt post at 12: 03 A.M. Mountain Standard Time (Denver Time). That should give everyone time to see the prompt from around the world.
WRITE YOUR POEM ON YOUR BLOG as a post.
How Long Do You Have and Your Deadline: You have a week to complete the Challenge with a deadline of Monday at 12:00 P.M. (Noon) Denver time, U. S. A. This will give me a chance to add the links from everyone’s poem post from the previous week, on the new prompt I send out on Tuesday. I urge everyone to visit the blogs and comment on everyone’s poem.
The rules are simple.
I will give you two words that you need to use (in some form) in the writing of your poetry. This will be a challenge in writing your Haibun poem. Follow the rules carefully.
The two words can be used in any way you would like to use them. Words have different definitions, and you can use the definitions you like. Feel free to use synonyms for the words when the poetry form calls for it.
LINK YOUR BLOG POST TO MINE WITH A PINGBACK. To do a Pingback: Copy the URL (the HTTPS:// address of my post) for the current week’s Challenge and paste it into your post. You may also place a copy of your URL of your post in the comments of the current week’s Challenge post.
Because of the time difference between where you are, and I am, you might not think your link is there. I manually approve all links. People participating in the challenge may visit you and comment or “like” your post. I also need at least a Pingback or a link in the comments section to know you took part and to include you in the Weekly Review section of the new prompt on Tuesday.
BE CREATIVE. Use your photos and create “Visual POETRY” if you wish, although it is not necessary. Use whatever program you want to make your images.
As time allows, I will visit your blog, comment, and TWEET your POETRY
If you add these hashtags to your post TITLE (depending on which poetry form you use) your poetry may be viewed more often:
#Haiku, #Tanka, #micropoetry, #poetry, #5lines, #Haibun, #Prose
IF YOU DO NOT HAVE YOUR TWITTER ACCOUNT LINKED TO YOUR BLOG – I WILL NO LONGER TWEET YOUR POETRY… THERE IS NO SENSE SINCE YOUR TWEET BECOMES PART OF WORDPRESS.COM AND THERE IS NO ATTRIBUTION BACK TO YOU.
CLICK HERE TO LEARN HOW TO LINK YOUR WORDPRESS BLOG TO TWITTER
You may copy the badge I have created to go with the Weekly Poetry Challenge Post and place it in your post:
HERE’S WHO JOINED US LAST WEEK FOR OUR 46th POETRY CHALLENGE USING THE WORDS – HONEY & WINE: (Please make sure to visit the other participants. We learn from each other. <3)
It was a busy week. I got no further in writing a poem than taking the *ahem* appropriate photo! Cheers!
Colorado makes the best Meade around!
Tanka Tuesday #Haiku: Honey & Wine – Jane Dougherty Writes
Honeyed Words | The Syllabub Sea
A heady mix – Playing with words
Cork Screw | like mercury colliding…
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge #46 – #Haiku #Tanka #Haibun: HONEY & WINE | But I Smile Anyway…
Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge – 46 – The Bag Lady
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge #46 – #Tanka: HONEY & WINE – Mick E Talbot Poems
Colleen’s Weekly, Poetry Challenge, Haiku, Tanka, Haibun: HONEY & WINE | willowdot21
Óðrœrir (a Tanka) | Darkness of His Dreams
Honey & Wine/Robbie’s Inspiration
A Fine Shield (# Tanka) – Smell The Coffee
Midas | Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo
#Haiku 59: Honey & Wine | Charmed Chaos
Mulled wine | WANDSANDUNICORNS
Imagination (Tanka) – Uniquesus
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge #46 – #Haiku #Tanka #Haibun: HONEY & WINE | M J Mallon Author
Honey and Wine: Tanka | Yesterday and today: Merril’s historical musings
Don’t FORGET! If you are selected as my Poet of the Week, your poem will also be featured in my bi-monthly newsletter. Sign-up HERE.
This week’s Poet of the Week is Sarah, from her blog called By Sarah. Her Haibun/Haiku, called Amaltheia, was my favorite this week. Her prose is written from the perspective of the She-Goat Goddess. I loved her descriptions and thought the Haiku at the end was perfect.
Image credit Ooberxandxdavie6
The warm honey glow of the late afternoon sun was a contrast to the prickling cool of the mountain air on her skin. She climbed to her vantage point, high above the valleys. The ‘T-tree’ had been formed one night when Zeus’ lightning bolt had cleaved it in two – destroying the wine-red leaves of Autumn. The remaining limbs had sagged and sighed their defeat, for it was Winter now, and the cornucopia were full for the cold months ahead. It was from here she loved to watch over the world below. The mountain goats were drawn here also, and she liked to imagine it was because they were summoned by her power; taking their place beside her in the stars.
nourishing earth’s child
Amaltheia; Capricorn;
goat goddess endures.
By Sarah ©2017
Author’s note: In Greek mythology, Amaltheia is the she-goat Goddess who nourished Zeus as an infant. In later years, Zeus broke off one of her horns, which then became the cornucopia, providing sustenance for all earth’s creatures. Amaltheia’s themes are success, humor, reason, devotion, and providence. Her symbols are a goat, cornucopia, and stars. For Her diligence and service, Amaltheia was transformed into the constellation Capricorn, where She remains.
Source: Journeying to the Goddess
Here are the two words for this week’s challenge: SHADOW & LIGHT
(any forms of the words and don’t forget to use synonyms)
Shadow & Light: Pixabay.com
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https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2017/08/22/separation/
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https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2017/08/22/facets-of-darkness/
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Hi Colleen,
Thanks for the beautiful prompt words.
https://radhikasreflection.wordpress.com/2017/08/22/tanka-shadow-light/
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Love the prompt words again thisweek, Colleen, Sarah did a beautiful haibun with last week’s challenge,
Here is my link forthis week.https://www.edwinasepisodes.com/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge/
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The link above doesn’t work, sorry this is the correct link! https://www.edwinasepisodes.com/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-shadow-light/
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something from my archive 🙂
https://ladyleemanilablog.wordpress.com/2017/08/22/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-47-haiku-tanka-haibun-shadow-light/
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Thanks so much Colleen! So thrilled to have been chosen as poet of the week! 🌼😃 Thanks for your hard work running this challenge each week. I love participating
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I’m glad you’re here. Keep up the good work. ❤️
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Reblogged this on By Sarah and commented:
Originally posted on Colleen Chesebro Fairy Whisperer.
I am so thrilled to have been chosen as Colleen’s “Poet of the Week” for my Haibun Amaltheia!
Thanks to Colleen for running the Haiku/Tanka/Haibun challenge each week. I just love participating 😃
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Congratulations, Sarah. Your Haibun was excellent! ❤️
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Congratulations Sarah! So deserving.
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Thanks so much! 😃
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My pleasure! I love reading your works.
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Now, you’ve made my day! I’m on it! 😀 ❤
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Thank you for the beautiful Prompt Colleen you brought back some happy memories. Here is my entry.
https://willowdot21.wordpress.com/2017/08/22/colleen-chesebros-weekly-poetry-challenge-shadow-and-light/
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Thanks for another great prompt! I definitely tapped into the shadow side of things with this week’s Haibun…
The Black – By Sarah
https://bysarahwhiley.wordpress.com/2017/08/22/the-black/
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It seems like I am often writing about shadows and light. We’ll see. 🙂
Another busy week coming up. I hope you got to enjoy that mead, Colleen!
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Just for you Colleen…I’m thinking you’ll appreciate this. 😉
https://katmyrman.com/2017/08/22/eclipsed/
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I was out of town and couldn’t participate last week, but here is a poem (Tanka) for this week: https://trentsworldblog.wordpress.com/2017/08/22/light-and-shadow-tanka/
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I wondered if my words chased you off! LOL! Glad to see you back, Trent. 😀
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http://wp.me/p4ayEo-2lT My short link in case the ping back doesn’t work
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Here you are Colleen!
http://butismileanyway.com/2017/08/22/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-47-haiku-tanka-shadow-light/
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Reblogged this on All About Writing and more.
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Thanks for sharing my poetry challenge for this week. ❤
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You are welcome!
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Thank you for the perfect prompt words! Here’s mine: https://mjmallon.com/2017/08/23/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-47-haiku-tanka-haibun-shadow-light/
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I knew it was your week! ❤
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You’re an angel Colleen, I’ll share this on my launch day, nearly there… xxx
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Don’t forget that on Thursday, I have your author spotlight, too. 😀
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Yes indeed, thank you Colleen, for sharing my guest post. 🙂 xxx
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Best wishes on your big day tomorrow! Once your book is live, I will change the book image to the one where people can sample and buy. ❤️
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Thank you Colleen. Nearly there… Appreciate all your help dear friend. Xxx
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Remember the feeling, Marje. There is no greater sense of accomplishment than publishing your first book. ❤
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Here’s mine #tanka
https://smellthecoffeeweb.blog/2017/08/23/puppet-master/
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I’m having problems keeping up with visiting blogs—too many prompts! Will try very hard 🙂
https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2017/08/23/tank-shadow-light/
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https://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/2017/08/24/black-noise/
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Verklempt
https://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/2017/08/24/sun-and-moon-as-one/
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Hello Colleen- Here is my take on the prompt this week. I wrote a Tanka. Hope your week is going well!
https://charmedchaos.com/2017/08/24/tanka-shadow-light/
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Hi Colleen!
Here is my modest attempt for this week’s prompt :
https://susmitamukherjee.wordpress.com/2017/08/24/shadow-and-light-tanka/
Have a nice day.
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A popular prompt this week! I know I could write many poems with these words, but I chose the storm from a couple of nights ago. 🙂
https://merrildsmith.wordpress.com/2017/08/24/storm-music/
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Enjoyed the challenge
https://syllabubsea.wordpress.com/2017/08/25/illuminating-shadows/
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An interesting combination this week, Colleen. Here is mine https://robbiesinspiration.wordpress.com/2017/08/26/poetry-challenge-light-and-shadow/
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Bit late at night but I had some fun, which is what matters right…
https://afterwards.blog/2017/08/26/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-47-shadow-light/
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