Happy POETRY Tuesday everyone!
Are you ready to get groovy with your poetry? Then, you’re in the right place! Pull up a chair, and let’s write some poetry.
First:
My friend, Yecheilyah Ysrayl is hosting a poetry contest on my blog, and I’m one of the judges! Click HERE to read the post and enter the contest. There are prizes!
I just couldn’t get my tanka written any quicker this week. The writing of book 2: The Meadow Fairy is never far from my mind… I used the word smoke and then changed veil to shroud. My Tanka is below:
You can write your poem in one of the three forms defined below:
HAIKU in English
TANKA
HAIBUN
You can do one poem or try to do one of each. It’s up to you – YOUR CHOICE. The instructions follow below:
HOW TO CREATE THE HAIKU in ENGLISH POETRY FORM
Are you new to writing the Haiku in English poetry form? Please read my page, How to Write a Haiku in English.
HOW TO CREATE THE TANKA POETRY FORM
Tanka poems are based on syllable structure much the same way a Haiku is written in the 5/7/5 format.
The Tanka form is easy to create: 5/7/5/7/7 and is a Haiku with two extra lines, of 7 syllables each consisting of five separate lines.
What makes a Tanka different from a Haiku is that the first three lines (5/7/5) are the upper phase. This upper stage is where you create an image in your reader’s mind.
The last two lines (7/7) of a Tanka poem are called the lower phase. Now here is where it gets interesting. The lower stage, the final two lines, should express the poet’s ideas about the image that was created in the three lines above.
Visit Jean Emrich at tankaonline.com Quick Start Guide
CLICK THE LINK TO SEE THE EXAMPLES and to learn how to write a Tanka poem
HOW TO CREATE THE HAIBUN POETRY FORM
NatureWriting.com shares how to write a Haibun poem. Please follow the rules carefully.
Writing Haibun
“The rules for constructing a haibun are simple.
- Every haibun must begin with a title.
- Haibun prose is composed of terse, descriptive paragraphs, written in the
first person singular.
- The text unfolds in the present moment, as though the experience is occurring now rather than yesterday or some time ago. In keeping with the simplicity of the accompanying haiku or tanka poem, all excessive words should be pared down or deleted. Nothing must ever be overstated.
- The poetry never attempts to repeat, quote or explain the prose.
- Instead, the poetry reflects some aspect of the prose by introducing a different step in the narrative through a microburst of detail.
- Thus the poetry is a sort of juxtaposition – seemingly different yet somehow connected.
It is the discovery of this link between the prose and the poetry that offers one of the great delights of the haibun form. The subtle twist provided by an elegantly envisaged link, adds much pleasure to our reading and listening.
Some Common Forms of Modern Haibun
1. The basic unit of composition– one paragraph and one poem
Idyll
We guide our canoe along the shores of beautiful Lake Esquagama. It is nine o’clock at night on this evening of the summer solstice. As the sun begins to dim the lake becomes still as glass. Along the shore, forests of birch are reflected in its mirrored surface, their ghostly white trunks disappearing into a green canopy. The only sound is a splash when our bow slices the water. We stop to rest the paddles across our knees, enjoying the peace. Small droplets from our wet blades create ever-widening circular pools. Moving on, closer to the fading shore, we savour these moments.
quiet
as a feather
on the breeze
the distant call
of a loon
2. The prose envelope – prose, then poem, then prose
Echoes of Autumn
I walk quietly in the late afternoon chill, birdsong silent, foliage deepened into shade, a rim of orange over darkening hills.
through soft mist
the repeated call
of one crow
Reaching the gate then crossing the threshold I breathe the scent of slow-cooking, the last embers of a fire, red wine poured into gleaming crystal, the table – set for two …
3. Poem then prose
(Rather than begin with a single tanka, I wrote a tanka set or sequence, followed by the prose. In contemporary haibun writing, the poems are occasionally presented in couplets or in longer groups).
The Road to Longreach
the coastal fringe
of green and blue
disappears
behind the gateway
to the outback
wheat, sorghum
and cotton stubble
glistens
in the autumn sun
as hawks patrol above
sunflowers
faces to the sky
the last blaze of colour
in the dryland’s
barren outlook
brown soil
of the rural strip
surrenders to
brick red, burnt ochre
of the open range
beyond
and further out –
in orange dust
a single cornstalk
displays its tassel
Days pass as we move through the desolate landscape, carved into two parts by the road we travel on, a continual ribbon drawing us straight ahead into its vanishing point, where only spinifex grass and saltbush lies between us and our destination.
4. The verse envelope — poem, prose, then poem
Winter Magic
silver light
thick hoar-frost
covers the window
Ice shapes resembling small fir trees stretch across the glass, while delicate snow flowers sparkle around them. Lost in its beauty, I move through this crystal garden as my warm fingers trace up and down, leaving a smudged pathway.
Mother’s voice interrupts, “Susan, come away from that cold window and get dressed or the school bus will leave without you!”
burning hoop pine
scent of a warm kitchen
oatmeal with brown sugar
5. Alternating prose and verse elements
The Sentinel
I climb round and round close to the outside wall, to avoid the railing where the stair treads narrow about their central post. A semi-circular platform rests high above. Its glass windows provide a sweeping view. Counting the last few steps, I finally reach the top of the Moreton Bay Lighthouse, where I gaze in awe at the ocean below.
the rising sun
an endless pathway
of molten gold
Outside the lighthouse, lamp is rotating. I disengage it as there is no need for its warning light. Now the bold red and white stripes of the lighthouse itself will become the beacon. I study the turbulence of the deep waters churning the rocky shore below. The subtle changes in the wind, waves, and tides are entered in my log book – these brief markers of the ever-transforming seascape that surrounds me.
ebb tide
a foot print shelters
one tiny crab”
Here are some great sites that will help you write your poetry and count syllables.
For Synonyms and Antonyms. When your word has too many syllables, find one that works.
Find out how many syllables each word has. I use this site for all my Haiku and Tanka poems. Click on the “Poetry Workshop” tab to create your Haiku or Tanka.
THE RULES
I will publish the Tuesday prompt post at 12: 03 A.M. Mountain Standard Time (Denver
Time). That should give everyone time to see the prompt from around the world.
WRITE YOUR POEM ON YOUR BLOG as a post.
How Long Do You Have and Your Deadline: You have a week to complete the Challenge with a deadline of Monday at 12:00 P.M. (Noon) Denver time, U. S. A. This will give me a chance to add the links from everyone’s poem post from the previous week, on the new prompt I send out on Tuesday. I urge everyone to visit the blogs and comment on everyone’s poem.
The rules are simple.
I will give you two words that you need to use (in some form) in the writing of your poetry. This will be a challenge in writing your Haibun poem. Follow the rules carefully.
The two words can be used in any way you would like to use them. Words have different definitions, and you can use the definitions you like. Feel free to use synonyms for the words when the poetry form calls for it.
LINK YOUR BLOG POST TO MINE WITH A PINGBACK. To do a Pingback: Copy the URL (the HTTPS:// address of my post) for the current week’s Challenge and paste it into your post. You may also place a copy of your URL of your post in the comments of the current week’s Challenge post.
Because of the time difference between where you are, and I am, you might not think your link is there. I manually approve all links. People participating in the challenge may visit you and comment or “like” your post. I also need at least a Pingback or a link in the comments section to know you took part and to include you in the Weekly Review section of the new prompt on Tuesday.
BE CREATIVE. Use your photos and create “Visual POETRY” if you wish, although it is not necessary. Use whatever program you want to make your images.
As time permits, I will visit your blog, comment, and TWEET your POETRY
If you add these hashtags to your post TITLE (depending on which poetry form you use) your poetry may be viewed more often:
#Haiku, #Tanka, #micropoetry, #poetry, #5lines, #Haibun, #Prose
If you haven’t set up your blog to share to Twitter, you should. Click HERE to learn how to link your blog to Twitter. It is an excellent way to meet other poets and share your work.
You may copy the badge I have created to go with the Weekly Poetry Challenge Post and place it in your post:
HERE’S WHO JOINED US LAST WEEK FOR OUR 37th POETRY CHALLENGE USING THE WORDS – SMOKE & VEIL: (Please make sure to visit the other participants. We learn from each other. <3)
Those smoky eyes – Playing with words
Haibun – Magic at the mountains! | radhikasreflection
Polished beads – Jane Dougherty Writes
Hush, a haiku – nosaintaugustine
Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge #37 Smoke & Veil | Annette Rochelle Aben
Meditation | Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 37 – SMOKE & VEIL – Mick E Talbot Poems
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 37 – SMOKE & VEIL | willowdot21
Smoke & Veil – Stuff & What If
Fire (Haiku) | Darkness of His Dreams
warmth of morning fire | rivrvlogr
Haiku #16: Smoke & Veil | Charmed Chaos
Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 37 – SMOKE & VEIL #Tanka #micropoetry | M J Mallon Author
Smoke & Veil | thoughts and entanglements
Conjuring | method two madness
Obscuring Reality | The Syllabub Sea
Star Spirit: Haibun | Yesterday and today: Merril’s historical musings
Haiku: Hypocrisy – My Feelings My Freedom
Haibun: Clouds – My Feelings My Freedom
This week’s Poet of the Week is Marje, from her blog called M J Mallon, Author. I enjoyed her Tanka pictured below for a couple of reasons. The image she included portrays a character named Ryder, from her soon to be published novel, The Curse of Time. Her daughter took the photo of her boyfriend shrouded in a veil of smoke. I love the creativity!! Second, her Tanka tells a mysterious story that once read, you want to know more.
Work hard on your poetry because I feature my poets of the week in my monthly newsletter. Are you a subscriber? Click HERE to signup today!
In Honor of International Fairy Day (June 24th), The words for this week’s challenge are: FAIRY & MAGIC
(any forms of the words AND don’t forget to use synonyms)
There are many different meanings to these words. Have fun and experiment. If the prompt words don’t Inspire you… write a POEM based on the photo BELOW:
Image Credit: Pixabay.com
POETRY TUESDAY! JOIN IN AND GET YOUR POETRY ON!
Amazon Link: The Heart Stone Chronicles: The Swamp Fairy
Very interesting! 😉👍 Not sure how I’ve not been to your blog before, Colleen. Love this!
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Thanks, Felicia! I hope you’ll join in. ❤️
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I’m not sure if I can this time, Colleen, with deadlines and July NaNoWriMo just around the corner, but I’ll definitely be watching… and taking notes! 😉
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Anytime, Felicia. The challenge runs every Tuesday. ❤
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Thank you Colleen for featuring me as poet of the week! Shall have to tell my daughter too! More photos of Ryder to come soon! Xxx
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Excellent! Well done, Marje. You will also be featured in my monthly newsletter. 😘❤️🌹
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Wow, thanks Colleen, that is wonderful. 🙂 xx
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I sent out my newsletter last night for June. ❤
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WOW! Fairy a n d magic,, shouldn’t that read poetic licence?
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LOL! That goes without saying! 😂
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If only I could shout loud enough
Telephones mean paying
I! LOVE! YOUR! CHALLENGES!
Two prompt words from me
DARE, thinking, yeah, and POETRY
When, and if you use them,
Of course that’s up yo thee
Keep them coming…
Mick
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LOL. You are awesome Mick! Keep writing that poetry! We love it! ❤️
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Thank you too kind lady
Four vaults full of words
I have at my disposal
My hearts chambers
It pumps them to my brain
Where i accept, or reject
What err the case might be
Which I think links on
To DARE and POETRY
Yours thoughts please
Collen dear kind lady
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Mick, you have the heart of a true poet! Keep up the good work. You bring a smile to me every week! 😀
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🙂
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Reblogged this on M J Mallon Author and commented:
Thrilled to discover I am poet of the week – Colleen’s weekly poetry challenge. Thank you Colleen. Read this reblogged post to read all the entries and details of Yecheilyah Ysrayl’s poetry contest that Colleen is hosting on her blog. She is one of the judges!
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https://rantingalong.wordpress.com/2017/06/20/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-35-fairy-magic/
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https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2017/06/20/letting-go/
I hope I haven’t departed too much from the spirit of the prompt.
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Hi Everyone,
I dusted off my fairytale hat. This is the result
https://thoughtsandentanglements.wordpress.com/2017/06/20/fairy-magic/
Have a great week everyone:)
Pat
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http://wp.me/p4ayEo-2e0 My short link in case the ping back doesn’t work
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Gol, this was a rough one to find a way into but I did it! http://wp.me/p8GM4F-gi
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Some lovely entries last week. Here is my link as I don’t think the pingback worked
https://www.edwinasepisodes.com/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-37-veil-smoke/
I love the prompt words for this week, Collen, so very you!! xx
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I have added the link for this week too, jut in case! https://www.edwinasepisodes.com/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-35-fairy-magic/
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Hi here is my entry , Fairy & Magic.
https://willowdot21.wordpress.com/
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Reblogged this on All About Writing and more.
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here’s a little pixie dust http://wp.me/p8nSFo-1sZ
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Hi Colleen! Here is my submission this week! Have a great one! https://charmedchaos.com/2017/06/21/haiku-21-fairy-magic/
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Thanks for another great challenge
https://syllabubsea.wordpress.com/2017/06/22/fairy-magic/
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https://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/2017/06/22/dusting-and-dancing/
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Another Haibun. I suppose there many different kinds of magic. 🙂
https://merrildsmith.wordpress.com/2017/06/23/the-violin-haibun/
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Of course there is! If you believe it. Your poetry is pure magic. ❤
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Awww–thank you, Colleen. ❤
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