Welcome to my contribution to my weekly #Poetry Challenge, where you can write your own Haiku, Tanka, or Haibun using the prompt words of wish & magic. Remember, synonyms are encouraged.
This week, I decided to write a Haibun with a Tanka, called “The Celebration.”
Both words have many connotations. Depending on how you use your synonyms you can alter the meaning of your prose & poetry in many ways. Don’t be afraid to experiment with synonyms. Sometimes subtle meanings pack the most punch in your poetry. Play with the words for different reactions.
The best poetry has layers of meaning.
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“The Celebration”
As the sun kisses my face, I reach my arms toward the brightness of the pale blue sky. The festival is nigh. Today is Earth Day, and I feel mother Gaia firm and fertile under the crusty snow beneath my feet. There is a coolness to the springtime breeze that drifts around me like a mist filled with ancient memories. The scent of marsh grasses fills my soul with a yearning that cannot be quenched. I feel the old magic here. I pause and wait. My only wish is to feel its warm embrace.
Meadow fairies call
from their dark caves down under
while magic roots stir
new growth surrenders
lamenting the cold spring snow
A flock of Lark Buntings takes wing filling the sky with their dark shadows. Startled, I turn and stare at the thick brown cattails as they rattle and shake from the bird’s departure in the shallow arroyo. My enchantment is complete while the sound of their avian voices echoes in my heart. Yes, the old magic is here and another season is mine to keep.
© 2017 Colleen M. Chesebro
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A very good poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you… for whatever reason, it took me all day to write. LOL! 😀
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You are welcome!
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Ooh, the old magic… rock it girl! ❤ This is beautiful
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LOL! Tuesday, I start working hard on book 2! I’ve got to move on from promotion and get busy! Hugs to you, Annette. ❤
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Great! Wish i could also write such poems. Thx again for the tip with the thesaurus, but i think it needs some years to do so. Best wishes for sunday! Michael
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You should practice. You never know until you try. Thanks for sharing. ❤️
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Thank you for the motivational words. Its always a pleasure to share your great work. Michael
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Wow, this is wonderful. Love it Colleen. 🙂
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Thanks, Marje. This Haibun will find its way into book 2. ❤️
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Magic roots are indeed stirring…(K)
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Thanks. I could see the slow motion replay of a tiny shoot bursting from the soil. It always look magical to me. ❤️
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Yes, indeed.
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Lovely Earth Day tribute, Colleen. Spring is definitely magical.
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Thanks, Merril. I’m writing many of these Haibun for my second book. ❤️
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Cool! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Kate McClelland.
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Beautiful, Colleen xx
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Thanks, Adele. My idea is to start each chapter with a Haibun/Haiku or Tanka as a glimpse into the chapter of book 2. 😀 ❤
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oh that will be wonderful, Colleen xx
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Thanks for your support, Adele. It means much to me. ❤
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❤
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This stirs all my senses. Beautiful, Colleen. ❤
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Thank you, Viva. I am writing all of these Haibun as chapter introductions for book 2. Happy Earth Day – yesterday! ❤
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Colleen, that is lovely!
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Thank you, Michelle. You have made my day! ❤
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I’m only Neanderthal, but even I could see the beauty in this little piece.
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Hello Andrew! Thank you! It’s the brevity. So few words to get your words across. ☺️
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