Ron from Ronovan Writes had us use the words “vie and reach,” for this week’s Haiku challenge. I like to call this visual haiku, “Survival.”
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This haiku was recognized on 4/13/15 by Ronovan Writes.
I love this beautiful Haiku.
Thank you Michelle. I have to fix it tomorrow. It should say reach. 😕
Good haiku. I like the part about leaves falling – interesting image.
Thank you! <3
A very philosophical haiku…
Thanks Olga. 😊
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This reminds me of a Tao saying, something like ‘leaf falling shows its front and back’ as a metaphor for the passage of a human life. Wish i could remember the exact quote. Lovely Haiku and congratulations on being Ronovan’s Choice!
I love your Tao saying. Quite profound! Thank you! 💖
Lovely haiku. 🙂
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You’re welcome!
I wonder if the leaves are disappointments, failures or just false starts. Nice haiku.
I thought of it as an opposite in that, we must have some bad to appreciate the good. When we excel, it is just not a simple road. There are potholes present too. Thank you for enjoying Meredith. <3
Hello Colleen! Beautiful haiku, very touching and inspiring. Loved it. <3
Vashti, thank you for your kind words. <3
Beautiful! And very relatable!
Thank you. 💖